Hello everyone!
Tomorrow, the plan is to go to a peer review group of local writers and read them A lovely apartment which has never been edited by anyone else. I suspect this (getting comments) will freshen up the text A LOT. I have not read my word in a group in about 4-5 years . I suspect this meeting may come as a breath of fresh air. Other writers will share their own work as well.
UPDATE
Once again I missed the meeting for having worked all night and sleeping in.